Thursday, June 16, 2011

Thanks and Thursday Poem Share


















Thanks to all of you who wished me Happy Birthday wishes in email, phone calls, and on facebook. I have had a lovely time the past two weeks, especially this past weekend (North Fork beach in photo) and now embrace 50 with all the grace and courage one can...LOL Did that sound the way one would embrace age? Heh!

I received three very funny cards in the past few days. One being my sister who greeted me with 'Sis' and 'Wonderful' in the first sentence, but ended with 'Save the Wax' candles for my mustache and leg hair...too funny!

This weekend is going to be filled with lots of relaxation. The past two weeks have been so busy that I have not written much. My little sister Mary is coming this next Wednesday and will stay for a whole month! I have a very busy schedule planned, and will be posting our adventures. White water rafting, and some things neither of us have tried before are planned.

Well any way here is a poem I have laying around my files, but want to work...

(removed for work shopping and revisions- Thanks for reading!)

6 comments:

Debbie said...

I love all the places you took us with this and then the ending . . .so good! :)
thank you and a late happy birthday!

Jim K. said...

Lush, and with lots of flow!
A sudden urge to watch Bob Ross
meditatively.

Jessie Carty said...

if i was playing with this one i'd look most closely at the verbs. there are a lot of verbs!

farmlady said...

This one has a nice descriptive sound. Watch extra words that you don't need.
Try taking a breath in different places and and really listen to the "voice" of the poem...
Keep working on this one.
Happy Birthday Sweetie. It's a milestone....

Jeanne said...

Rats, the window of opportunity slammed shut before I could read it!

Glad you had a great birthday, friend.

Toon said...

Just got back from a very long weekend trip -- sorry I missed it.