tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post7425001674362862164..comments2023-04-13T04:45:31.494-07:00Comments on Creative TMI: Metaphorically Speaking, Of CourseChef Ehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-54170655913555615642011-06-25T22:37:29.029-07:002011-06-25T22:37:29.029-07:00That's an epic piece!
The drama in the everyda...That's an epic piece!<br />The drama in the everyday.<br />Nice finish to it.Jim K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16105117011358723753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-51429095492047974182011-06-22T04:50:43.040-07:002011-06-22T04:50:43.040-07:00I really like "Morning shadows start tripping...I really like "Morning shadows start tripping<br />across my lap".<br /><br />I took a writing class with Nicole Hollander yesterday and it was a blast. (She's the creator of those "Sylvia" cartoons)Toonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02867993460493875221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-92077148994559360592011-06-21T18:48:29.795-07:002011-06-21T18:48:29.795-07:00I like it! Get some input from Jessie, but I think...I like it! Get some input from Jessie, but I think this is a direction you should move in.<br /><br />When you asked for an example this morning, I remembered a line from one of your food poems, about the Thanksgiving dishes "lying in state." That's a great one--it suggests that this meal is more than a meal, also an occasion. It also brings up images of death and silent mourning. <br /><br />That's what I'm talking about!Jeanne Estridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13096521122802823385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-22627406446846475902011-06-21T17:09:38.770-07:002011-06-21T17:09:38.770-07:00You mean you take requests for poems! :) I won...You mean you take requests for poems! :) I won't do it to you, but this one was nice . . .nice writing and nice of you!<br />Have a wonderful time with your sis!Debbiehttp://iftodaywehear.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com