tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post2084707272097404600..comments2023-04-13T04:45:31.494-07:00Comments on Creative TMI: Feeling Secure- Poem ShareChef Ehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-15550984634602071102011-09-06T05:23:11.005-07:002011-09-06T05:23:11.005-07:00My favorite part:
"a beetle settled on green ...My favorite part:<br />"a beetle settled on green leaf <br /> speaking to the sky <br /> talking of water gods"<br />...that's fine writing!!Toonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02867993460493875221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-49580398982419663162011-09-06T03:17:01.570-07:002011-09-06T03:17:01.570-07:00Really interesting places you are going here.. Mon...Really interesting places you are going here.. Monsters with a conscious? Who would have thought such a thing! <br /><br />Keep on with the poetry-writing! (And the plunging into cold water!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-904378121807711412011-09-04T14:25:47.076-07:002011-09-04T14:25:47.076-07:00"beetle...water gods", love that bit.
c..."beetle...water gods", love that bit.<br /><br />crazy what force water can have.Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-44940956264491369252011-09-03T13:38:12.584-07:002011-09-03T13:38:12.584-07:00I agree with "Debbie". I like the bottom...I agree with "Debbie". I like the bottom poem the best... but I also liked showing the two drafts and how the poem developed.Farmladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05968196925826571573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-56152855209293024802011-09-03T07:52:27.322-07:002011-09-03T07:52:27.322-07:00Love that you stepped out of your comfort zone to ...Love that you stepped out of your comfort zone to do this! When I went back to grad school Ovid was one of the writers I went back to. I found myself making new metaphors out of old mythology! I think it works the way you did it with inspiration versus over use of allusion :)Jessie Cartyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13181286764480973423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-24462656451014122922011-09-02T20:48:29.503-07:002011-09-02T20:48:29.503-07:00Elizabeth . . .you amaze me at the variety of thin...Elizabeth . . .you amaze me at the variety of things you write about. :) I really liked the bottom poem best!Debbiehttp://iftodaywehear.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8139980430155806217.post-6391056129311232642011-09-02T19:36:04.545-07:002011-09-02T19:36:04.545-07:00Thanks for sharing the original lines that lead to...Thanks for sharing the original lines that lead to the final poem. I find it amazing sometimes that the initial words are merely ways for the mind to restructure thoughts.Bagman and Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06760203276065466927noreply@blogger.com